From cd5af81c06b6fe57658c7df4c04897e498f4a66e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Giovanni Harting <539@idlegandalf.com>
Date: Sun, 1 Mar 2020 19:57:37 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] fixed some typos and restructured some text.

---
 config-example.yaml | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/config-example.yaml b/config-example.yaml
index 3ef24c3..7ee0e44 100644
--- a/config-example.yaml
+++ b/config-example.yaml
@@ -14,25 +14,24 @@ thermalzones:
     # This is your source temperature.
     source: amdgpu/temp1_input
     # This is most likely 1000 for your temp sensor as well.
-    # If not, check what you sensor is outputing if you try to read form it.
+    # If not, check what you sensor is outputing if you try to read from it.
     factor: 1000
     # Define all fans that this thermal zone is going to control.
-    # There is not limit how many fans one thermal zone can control.
+    # There is no limit to how many fans one thermal zone can control.
     # You can have different limitations on your fans, for example:
     # - amdgpu/pwm1: 170
-    # means your GPU fan's pwm is never getting set higher than 170, limiting its max. rpm value.
+    # means your GPU fan's pwm1 is never getting set higher than 170, limiting its max. rpm value.
     # You can specify an lower limit as well:
     #  - it8686/pwm1: [100, 200]
-    # means your fan's pwm is never under 100, and never over 200.
+    # means your fan's pwm is never set under 100, and never over 200.
     fan:
       - it8686/pwm2
       - amdgpu/pwm1: 170
-    # This is your target temperature. This one of the main control knobs. Set it to what your thermal zone's temp input
-    # should be. Don't set this as high as its max temperature allowance, since pid is gonna allow some overshooting.
-    # This should be a comfortable temperature for your equipment.
+    # This is your target temperature. This is one of the main control knobs. Set this to a comfortable temperature for
+    # your equipment. Don't set this as high as its max temperature allowance, since pid is gonna allow some overshooting.
     target: 60
     # For understanding PID please have a look at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/PID_controller. The forementioned page
-    # also explains what p, i and d stand for. These are the second main control knobs.
+    # also explains what p, i and d stand for and what they do in detail. These are the second main control knobs.
     # Simplified you can view them as:
     #   p = how heavy should pid weight difference in temperature
     #   i = how heavy should pid weight difference in temperature over time